I like the idea of this picture, but I think it would have been better if the wax had been smoother. Do you know what I mean? 'Cause I'm not doing a very good job of explaining it. Sorry. Let me try again.

The picture itself is a good idea. The quality is good and the lighting is good. My only thing is the way the wax looks. And I know that it's a hard thing to do, to get wax smooth, but it would be worth trying to do, I think. I also think that you should look for a simpler background, but it's really not a bad background.

I really do like this.

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"My Mom said she learned how to swim when someone took her out in the lake and threw her off the boat. I said, 'Mom, they weren't trying to teach you how to swim.'"

thanks, that's good advice. thanks!

i did this last night at about two in the morning on a pure artistic energy, if you will. i think i might re-do this and try to do something like that.

thanks so much for the feedback!

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You ever dance with the devil in the pale moonlight?


~bleachclub ~Cain-GodChild-Club *HostClub *DeathNotefan ~Adult-Swim-Club

You're welcome! I'm glad I could help!

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"My Mom said she learned how to swim when someone took her out in the lake and threw her off the boat. I said, 'Mom, they weren't trying to teach you how to swim.'"

did that hurt?
pritty pic, tho. and i agree w/ the smoother idea. but that would be hot

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"Most of the shadows of this life are caused by our standing in our own sunshine." -Ralph Waldo Emerson

lol, yea a bit. but beauty sometimes comes at the cost of pain......well, maybe not.

tankoo!

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You ever dance with the devil in the pale moonlight?


~bleachclub ~Cain-GodChild-Club *HostClub *DeathNotefan ~Adult-Swim-Club

*squee*

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I could be your antidote,
but please make sure you take a note
That I won't cure the sickness,
But I'm sure to kill the pain.